
Originally Posted by
Dusto
I finished reading H.M.S. Surprise last night, which is the third of the Aubrey and Maturin novels by Patrick O'Brian. He's a really good writer. It's hard t explain why, because he isn't flashy, but he's just elegant, subtle, and economical. His characters are fully-formed enough that you know what they're thinking in particular situations without him spelling it out for you, and so he doesn't bother spelling it out. Or he'll strip his transitions down to nothing without it ever being jarring. He'll have something like (sort of a made up example, not a direct quote):
"Is Stephen awake yet? Can I see him?"
Jack pursed his lips. "Just try not to upset him."
"How are you?" she asked.
In context, it's clear that she's gone below deck and is now talking to Stephen, but I feel as if most writers would worry that some readers would see that "How are you?" directly following "Just try not to upset him" as a direct response to Jack. O'Brian trusts the reader's intelligence, though.
Again, I know this is simple stuff, and not exactly pyrotechnic, but reading these books I'm really in awe of just how masterful and elegant his narrative style is. Some of the best straight-forward realist prose I've ever read.
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