New Guy looking for Feedback

[eriklundy]

Hi folks, I'm a new writer/artist with a webcomic looking for some general feedback. FYI, I'm definitely mainly a writer and draw like one. Love to someday collaborate with more competent penciller/inkers. My goofy crime comic is up at www.smalltimerscomic.com.

Thanks so much for your time,

Erik

[Arion]

First page: logo and general design is very good. And the drawing style reminds me of Scotty Young which is, of course, a compliment.
Second page: I like the faces and the body expression, but the vehicle looks strange (and not in a good sense).
I think you have a nice grasp of perspective and page composition. Page 3 is great.
I like your style, and I know you'll get better with practice.

[eriklundy]

Thanks so much for your time Arion. Appreciate the notes. Never thought about Scottie, but it's a welcome compliment.