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and sorry i don't answer before but i post a advanced reply's and never appear here. anyway another 2 pages and the story.
PAGE 1:
*Guy suspects woman is odd, black widow alien that eats brains, all women are!*
PANEL 1: The kids throw the rice at HAL (2and MIRIAM (19), as they fly down the aisle to the limo after being pronounced husband and wife.
CAPTION: My wedding day was the happiest time of my life.
PANEL 2: Hal and Miriam frolic on a Hawaiian beach.
CAPTION: And, it only got better.
PANEL 3: Hal has his feet up on the coffee table as he drinks a long neck and watches the football game. Miriam cooks in the kitchen.
CAPTION: Life was good until...
PANEL 4: Hal perks up with unease.
MIRIAM (O. P.): Honey?
TITLE: THE NEWLYWED GAME
CREDITS
PANEL 5: "Montage" of Miriam nagging him.
MIRIAM: Don't leave your shoes out!!!
MIRIAM: Wash the dishes!!!
MIRIAM: Don't move that!!!
PANEL 6: BOB (Hal's old friend, hugely muscular) looks vacant and beaten down and stands next to his wife JEN (24, controlling, blond, boobs).
JEN: Bob's so stupid! He never listens or does anything right!
CAPTION: Soon, my house was no longer my own. Even my friends were... different.
PAGE 2:
PANEL 1: A terrified sweat-covered Hal continues his life or deathe diatribe for the camera.
HAL: Then, I learned what is really going on! Men, you must listen to me--
PANEL 2: Hal freaks out when the sinister hand of Miriam turns off the recording video camera. In her other hand, Miriam warms up an alien drill.
SFX: CLICK
MIRIAM: Submit.
SFX: WRRR WRRRRRRR
PANEL 3: Alien technology sprouts from the recliner and holds down Hal, as Miriam straddles him and drills into the back of his skull with the alien instrument.
HAL: AAAAAAAA!!!!!
SFX: WRRRRRRRRRRRR
PANEL 4: Miriam talks trash about Hal to a COUPLE at a picnic.
MIRIAM: Hal is such an idiot! I hate him!
CAPTION: The Next Day.
PANEL 5: Miriam sends a message to "control" on her Blackberry that says "Earthling assimilated."
PANEL 6: QUEEN B, a hyper-intelligent twenty-foot tall nine-armed lizard lady rejoices after receiving the message and laughs with glee in front of his massive world-destroying WEAPON PLANET.
QUEEN B: Only a few more life forces and Terra Tank will be fully charged and operational!
SFX: BWA-HAHAHAHAHAHA!!
CAPTION: THE END
in the 2 page i make a mistake a put panel 5 in panel 7
and a one page story
new pin up
the script is from Craig McCutcheon and pencil, inks, grayscale and lettering me.
please comment.
a fanart
I absolutely love that Kick-Ass.
Thanks Arion Glad you like it.
and here 2 more pages a 2 page story.
another one
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new one
nuff said
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