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Ben Rosen
01-26-2008, 01:01 PM
How do you express panting in comics? I'm drawing a blank here. Gasps?

Ashwin Pande
01-26-2008, 01:01 PM
Pant! Wheeze! Gasp!

Whip
01-26-2008, 01:02 PM
Huh-huh-huhhh...

Ben Rosen
01-26-2008, 01:03 PM
Pant! Wheeze! Gasp!

And if the dude's speaking while out of breath i just insert those into the middle of the sentences? I guess that sounds right...

copypastepuke
01-26-2008, 01:03 PM
grasping at your lungs. bending over hands on knees. whatever!

Hawkdevil
01-26-2008, 01:05 PM
"I *huff* hate *huff* youguys *huff huff huff*"
...that sort of thing, I'd expect...

Ashwin Pande
01-26-2008, 01:05 PM
And if the dude's speaking while out of breath i just insert those into the middle of the sentences? I guess that sounds right...

Yeah.. that and the image should convey the message effectively.

NeverWanderer
01-26-2008, 01:07 PM
Doing the bracing yourself on your knees and exhaling with puffed cheeks and wide eyes could do it visually.

Or, for dialogue, "You... could do it... like... this... -huff-"

"Or -hhh- like -hhh- this..."

Ashwin Pande
01-26-2008, 01:09 PM
"Hey *pant*... I... *wheeze*... hey wait *gasp* up!"

hmmm...

NeverWanderer
01-26-2008, 01:10 PM
"Hey *pant*... I... *wheeze*... hey wait *gasp* up!"

hmmm...

This one's my favorite. :thumb:

Donal DeLay
01-26-2008, 02:48 PM
Doing the bracing yourself on your knees and exhaling with puffed cheeks and wide eyes could do it visually.

Or, for dialogue, "You... could do it... like... this... -huff-"

"Or -hhh- like -hhh- this..."
I like this. The "hhh" is much better than "gasp/wheeze" cause when I'm out of breath it's always a "HHH!" sound. Also, make the balloons kinda cloud-shaped, like a thought balloon with a tail, and broken up with dotted lines instead of a solid line for the whole balloon.

NickT
01-26-2008, 02:52 PM
...s between some words? Maybe a reference to being out of breath?