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Patrick King
08-15-2007, 01:45 PM
Alright, I'm working on a Flash animation clip, and I wanted to see if anyone was willing to provide some comments/criticism/input, because I feel stuck on it. Here's what I have (http://www.outsiderzero.com/etc/funk.html), it's about 25 seconds long. I'm thinking about maybe adding some text or something in the background, in keeping with the 70's/funk/blaxploitation feel.

Shane W
08-15-2007, 01:53 PM
Okay, I almost really love it minus a couple of things.

The music comes in too choppy and it's not a smooth transition on the loop. The car is just a hair off in it's perspective
The clip is way too log for the music loop, the music gets a tad annoying with the short loop

nick maynard
08-15-2007, 02:23 PM
ill give more constructive comments later, but ill say right now that i think it rules.

Movie Maker
08-15-2007, 02:27 PM
Okay, I almost really love it minus a couple of things.

The music comes in too choppy and it's not a smooth transition on the loop. The car is just a hair off in it's perspective
The clip is way too log for the music loop, the music gets a tad annoying with the short loop


agreed.