I wrote a humorous essay today, tell me what you think!

[King Of Fakeposts]

You're going to need a really fucked up sense of humor to enjoy this though

http://www.thisisby.us/index.php/content/six_dead_women_you_would_still_have_sex_with

Did you laugh? Did you puke? Suggestions on improvement? Shoot it.

[Mister Mets]

Honest opinion....

I stopped reading after two paragraphs because I started getting the impression that the writer was kinda pathetic (though I'm pretty sure he's not an actual necrophiliac.)

Also, saying "this chick" in an essay makes you seem instantly uneducated, which indicates your essay's not worth reading.

[King Of Fakeposts]

Honest opinion....

I stopped reading after two paragraphs because I started getting the impression that the writer was kinda pathetic (though I'm pretty sure he's not an actual necrophiliac.)

Also, saying "this chick" in an essay makes you seem instantly uneducated, which indicates your essay's not worth reading.

It's written through the POV of a necrophiliac character, just so you know. It's not real, though it pretends to be. It was meant to be a satire of misogyny, creepy fetishes, and internet nerd rage.


Essay was probably the wrong way to term this piece.

[X arseface X]

To me it's too obviously trying to be "shocking".

[Angeles]

Sorry, but necrophilia is a pretty cliche'd shock joke. His choices are too predictable, too. Anna Nicole Smith? Marilyn Monroe? Maybe try someone less obvious.