tdaniel
04-18-2007, 09:58 PM
Maybe not everyone knows that in a former life David was a Detective for the NYPD POWERS Homicide division.
This is only a first draft - so don't come running after me with a red pen...
DETECTIVE MACK
REAL NAME: DAVID MACK
STATUS: LIVING
TITLE: DETECTIVE NYPD, POWERS HOMICIDE DIVISION
ALIASES: NONE
POWERS/ABILTIES: NONE/CIVILIAN
POWER LEVEL: NA
AFFILIATIONS: CHRISTAIN WALKER, DEENA PILGRIM, UNITY TEAM
Assigned to the Red Hawk homicide investigation, Detective Mack proves a quick witted counterpart to Walker and Pilgrim. His close ties and solid working relationship to team Unity allow for easy access to the Unity Hall where Ultra Bright (Diana Carver) provides the trio of detectives with their chief suspect, Red Hawk’s former sidekick The Wing.
Under questioning by Detective Mack, Wing reveals that due to Ultra Bright’s power of suggestion he has dressed in costume and appeared against his will thereby seemingly implicating himself in the murder of Red Hawk. Angered by Ultra Bright’s deceitful tactics, Mack leads the detectives back to Unity Hall. His threats against Ultra Bright of obstructing justice are short-lived as she engages her power and easily coerces both the enthralled Mack and Walker into agreeing that her motives are pure.
Frustrated, Mack next seeks out Dragonfist, the washed out, overweight, and thoroughly estranged member of team Unity who peddles his autograph and blatant disdain for his former Unity teammates at POWERS nostalgia conventions. With some cajoling Mack squeezes a lead out of Dragonfist; the location of Nucleus, the only Unity team member who might still possess some knowledge of Supershock’s whereabouts. Before the detectives can move forward with their investigation, a series of devastating attacks levels the state of Utah, claiming Nucleus’ life in the process. Subsequent attacks destroy the Vatican in Rome, and the Gaza strip in Israel. Pilgrim intuits that these powerful acts could only be committed by a power with the level 9 capabilities of Supershock, a viewpoint Detective Mack strongly questions.
Detective Mack does not remain involved long enough in the investigation to be proven wrong, as Pilgrim, sensing Ultra Bright’s ability to compromise both Mack’s and Walker’s judgment, hastily takes matters into her own hands and improvises her own solo investigation.
..wrote that last night in an effort to finish all of the prominent law enforcement officials for the forthcoming encyclopedia...
This is only a first draft - so don't come running after me with a red pen...
DETECTIVE MACK
REAL NAME: DAVID MACK
STATUS: LIVING
TITLE: DETECTIVE NYPD, POWERS HOMICIDE DIVISION
ALIASES: NONE
POWERS/ABILTIES: NONE/CIVILIAN
POWER LEVEL: NA
AFFILIATIONS: CHRISTAIN WALKER, DEENA PILGRIM, UNITY TEAM
Assigned to the Red Hawk homicide investigation, Detective Mack proves a quick witted counterpart to Walker and Pilgrim. His close ties and solid working relationship to team Unity allow for easy access to the Unity Hall where Ultra Bright (Diana Carver) provides the trio of detectives with their chief suspect, Red Hawk’s former sidekick The Wing.
Under questioning by Detective Mack, Wing reveals that due to Ultra Bright’s power of suggestion he has dressed in costume and appeared against his will thereby seemingly implicating himself in the murder of Red Hawk. Angered by Ultra Bright’s deceitful tactics, Mack leads the detectives back to Unity Hall. His threats against Ultra Bright of obstructing justice are short-lived as she engages her power and easily coerces both the enthralled Mack and Walker into agreeing that her motives are pure.
Frustrated, Mack next seeks out Dragonfist, the washed out, overweight, and thoroughly estranged member of team Unity who peddles his autograph and blatant disdain for his former Unity teammates at POWERS nostalgia conventions. With some cajoling Mack squeezes a lead out of Dragonfist; the location of Nucleus, the only Unity team member who might still possess some knowledge of Supershock’s whereabouts. Before the detectives can move forward with their investigation, a series of devastating attacks levels the state of Utah, claiming Nucleus’ life in the process. Subsequent attacks destroy the Vatican in Rome, and the Gaza strip in Israel. Pilgrim intuits that these powerful acts could only be committed by a power with the level 9 capabilities of Supershock, a viewpoint Detective Mack strongly questions.
Detective Mack does not remain involved long enough in the investigation to be proven wrong, as Pilgrim, sensing Ultra Bright’s ability to compromise both Mack’s and Walker’s judgment, hastily takes matters into her own hands and improvises her own solo investigation.
..wrote that last night in an effort to finish all of the prominent law enforcement officials for the forthcoming encyclopedia...